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David stared at the door. As his heart pounded he heard the creaking of the door. Lightning flashed at the window and his teeth started to chatter. As his eyes widened he saw a pair of red eyes peering around the door at him. He couldn't move....
He couldn't move he took a deep breath then...Bang! It happened upstairs now he was scared. He said to himself what could this creature be then… It was there behind him. It was ready to grab him but he ran away far away but he had forgotten about the creature behind the door. The creatures caught him he tried to get away but he could not he was trapped with them. Finally he woke up It was just a dream or was it.
ReplyDeleteWhen he woke up he saw he was in a room not his room .He went downstairs there was footprints on the floor. Suddenly there was a knock KNOCK KNOCK!
ReplyDeleteIt went he was motionless he didn't know what to do.
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DeleteThen he came up with an idea he would go home by going through the door. When he was through the door she was back in the front room. He thought he was in a labyrinth or was he ...
ReplyDeleteYes he was. As he went round and round he found a smal cavred door.
ReplyDelete"YES!"he shouted with excitement.
Davied tiptoed towards the door slowly,as he did Davied saw a long,green,scuffy carpet along it .Without no waring he was pushed into the pathway and the door slamed.Davieds heart was pouneding with fear.